I am beginning
to really like this character,
this person
she’s becoming,
with her quirks
and oddities
and flaws
and mannerisms
and thought bubbles
intermingling with
conversations.
I just wish
she could go somewhere
instead of tagging along
on a contrived journey.
Once-in-a-while I think
I might be able to do it.
The story is fun
and intriguing (I think)
and there is movement,
but I can’t get the pieces
to fit
and there are too many spaces
between plot points,
interactions
and other characters,
so I can’t get anything
to actually work.
It makes me wonder
if nothing is even there.
Maybe I'm overthinking it
and she's only
a red herring.